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 Post subject: 2ndFleet ORG: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:38 pm 
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Battle 1: Klingon Invasion
Mission Faction: Federation
Mission Type: Space & Ground
Mission Location: Bomari System, Risa Sector
Sirius Sector Block

Mission Briefing (Listening Post):
Starfleet Intelligence has contacted Deep Space K7 to be on alert for a Klingon Invasion Force. The Station Commander suspects the Klingons to be rebuilding the Listening post in Bomari System and he therefore wants to dispatch a ship or a small Task Force into the System to investigate.

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This mission is the first of the 2nd Fleet Klingon Invasion Battle.

Commander Bez from Deep space K7 has reason to believe that the Klingons started to rebuild a listening post in the Bomari System. We need you to investigate.

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2ndFleet.2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post
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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:42 pm 
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As an additional note:

This is the first test on a mission on live for me, so I am looking forward to the feedback. I am aware of some issues with it and look forward to the next missions where this will be addressed.

The hints for the next missions in this battle, however, are already given.

Imaga System
Trimble System
Xarantine System

The final battle of the Invasion series is still to be decided.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:12 pm 
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Having a hard time finding this mission. Is it in the community authored area yet??
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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:46 am 
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I had a hard time finding it myself the first time around. Currently it is under "review content"

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Easiest to search for the author at the moment.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 8:27 am 
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Updated the mission based on the feedback.

Space: The Klingon BoP spawn now on top of your ship
Ground: made teh second part quite a bit easier (still tough, but not STF style anymore) and added a respawn point.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:18 pm 
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Thank you all for reviewing. The mission now moved to the Community Authored Tab. So far with a rating of 3, which is fair for what it is. I started working on the next one, which will probably take a bit longer to release.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet.org: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:20 pm 
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Just read the Foundry Eula again, and at this bulletpoint
  • You may not publish web URLs in your content.
I had to think of your mission.

You named yours 2ndFleet.org: ....

The 2ndFleet.org, while it's also our fleet name, can be construed as a URL, which in fact also revolves to this very page.

I'd suggest changing it to '2ndFleet ORG' so to not run foul of this EULA requirement.

I have to change it in my missions too, since I also use the same format there

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet ORG: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:28 pm 
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Aye, also looks better as a name anyway.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet ORG: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:03 pm 
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Added a new ending. There is now an additional map transition and some story text to tie this mission in with the following 1-2 mission. This way it will eventually feel more like a whole campaign (or to keep star trek terms, a series).

Other than that I will leave this one alone. It will stay as a short more patrol type mission. In the end this makes sense for the story build up in the Series.

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 Post subject: Re: 2ndFleet ORG: 1-1 Listening Post (by wulfman)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:30 pm 
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Replayed it again to see the changes.

A few suggestions and questions :)

Instead of "Enter Bomari System", change to
"Begin Listening Post", or "2ndFleet ORG - Start Listening Outpost" or similar.
Incase some people have multiple quests open in the Bomari System.

what exactly is the end fight for? The Klingons come down, you shoot 'em, but what is the storyline exactly for them to
be there?


In general also the mission naming

"1-1" sounds as if it'd be part one of only one mission.
"1-2" sounds more correctly, part one of two (so if there are more, e.g. 1-4, 2-4, etc.)

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